The Beginning of my maps


And of course id like to thank torch, Spyke ( aka die :p ), and uni for the help lol 



Storm City banking


Storm city Cathedral


Storm City Apartment building


Storm City Shop


Storm City Shop


Storm city shop ( improved )


Storm City regenal jail


Fiendstar’s Custom Apartment

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The-Stormers Arena


The-Stormers Arena 2


The-Stormers Arena 3


The-Stormers Arena 4


The-Stormers Arena 5


The-Stormers Arena 6


The-Stormers Arena 7


The-Stormers Arena 8


The-Stormers Arena 9


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Juradema's shrine map sets

path to Juradema's shrine


Juradema's shrine entrance


Juradema's shrine


Juradema's shrine right path


Juradema's shrine 1


Juradema's shrine 2


Juradema's shrine 3


Juradema's shrine 4


Juradema's shrine 5


Juradema's shrine 6


Juradema's shrine 7


Juradema's shrine 8


Juradems's shrine 9


Juradem's shrine 10


and working on 2 a day

might should have made them a bit bigger because my roads aren't normal stone hehe yea i like to change it around a bit but it seems to work well

and I'm think about a dungeon soon to come if u guys or girls like these ones of course

From what i can see, not bad

A few things without looking too deeply:
-Your buildings are very large. One or two being so large is fine... but not so many. Make them smaller... like half a map instead of a full one.
-Your stormer's arena looks cool--at least from the map editor. Have you tested it? It has potential... if you can make it work like it's supposed to
-Storm City Shop is very drab and dull. It mainly suffers from gargantuan's disease, but i think you could probably add in some more decoration

Of everything, i think your bank is your best building by far. It's unique shape is great, and the fact that it isn't one large square gives it a leg-up on the rest. Plus, you've got some landscaping there... make use of the little bushes archs (the round, green ones); they do wonders for landscaping. Also, if you can get your stormer's arena to play like it looks, that'll be one really nice map for a beginner.

Cheers,
Unislash

PS: Randomize floor tiles, if you haven't

The shop looks like its dull(like what Uni said) ? Could you add like tiles, shelves ?

Although I'm not a map maker, but the arena seems like it is kind of "empty"? And if it's really on main server, can there be like floors like lvl 1-50 a floor,lvl 51-80 a floor, lvl 81-110 a floor ?

Anyway, just a opinion hehe. (can't really say something cause I'm not map maker)

But you're a player. And the opinions of people who use the maps are just as valuable.

yea i had made it better but i had to reinstall my map editor and i cant quite figer out how to make it look like its supposed to 

yea I'm thinking about a tavern design too

I'm gonna try a risky surgery to try and save my shop i wounder should i just reduce some of its items or just make it so it has 2 floors but that's not really fixing the problem is it ?

And the arena hehe just wait till its done

but hehe ill show ya instead of telling u know what they say actions speak louder than words 

Cg i though about that i might could make a quest for that or somthin

Now i gotta remake my jail but does any 1 know how to update the heap size of the editor cuz i think i could make my city more in portotions but thx to -
                                                                        Torch, Spyke, And uni

Thx for the oppions too

but i do agree that my shop might need some help :p

I agree with that particular sentence .


Why not add the tavern into the apartment building ? 

hehe yea i also remade my shop resized it so it now fits in 1 24/24 ( i think that's the standard size )

from taking up 2 entire maps

but now let me get started working on my jail lol where would we be with out one of those

I'm thinking of some quest designs too now i only need some help scripting them i mean i don't know how exactly to add options in it well really I've never used the script at all just looked at and tried to figure out what to do with it

Buildings should not take up a full map, especially shops (as they tend to be rather dull anyway ). However, use common sense... if your shop is comprised of many stores... sure, it can take up more than one map if it really needs to. Still, be wary when using a lot of your space...

Cheers,
Unislash

yea over all my cathedral or my bank are my best ones so far i think
and i minimized the size of my shop to fit in 1 my

i was wondering if some1 could make this a sticky or tell me how to if it wouldn't be to much trouble pls

Well, actually, it shouldn't be a sticky. If we did that for your map set, we would have to do that for everyone else's, then there wouldn't be any point in having stickies at all

working on my jail atm hopefully it will give a bit of a twist to my map lol well ill keep the surprise to myself till I'm finished with it

those new 2 images i put on are a bit bigger so might take a bit longer for them to load