These look really nice, but be consistent with your map names ("Elder Ruins", "elder ruins" and "elderruins" I have seen). Attention to little details like that are good, though not critical. After all,  "Underground City" was spelt "Undergroud City" until I fixed it (it was like that on B3 ). See michtoen's post above on where to email map sets for consideration.

oops    i didnt even look at those names after i made them ill have to fix that. And i sent one mapset in and i was either a) ignored accidentally or b) lost because i got no response. So i already sent them to uni and he gave me some tips that i fixed on the 2nd and 3rd floor and as i said im fixing the first floor and so i wanted some feedback before i sent them to that email adress again. So keep the feedback coming

Ah, good job with those floor masks and lighting . Makes a world of difference. Your third floor looks great, how's your second and first going?

Remember, design is the key now that you've got decoration and lighting down

Cheers,
Unislash

Hi @ all

@ namto
Looks great so far    
... only one comment from my side,
try to use more diffrent floor tiles in the second floor ... then it looks more natural  :wink:

Keep on going !

Cya
Sammy (aka Tammy)

Im ot sure i fully comprehend what you mean. Do mean that i use different floors and replace the old ones with new, or just add a variety of new tiles mixed with the old?

She means to use the rest of the cave floors and randomize them a bit. It's easy, just put them into a pickmap

Cheers,
Unislash

I really like the feel the screens give me... great work namto!

finished the whole first floor (re-did the whole thing cause i thought the other on es were crap) the screenies ive taken are somewhat decieving as the maps play alot better than they look, but oh well youll se them sooner or later



http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k35/siggy_05/floor12.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k35/siggy_05/floor1.jpg

theres a few screnies ive got more if you wanna see the rest of the first floor

Not bad, not bad at all...

I think you need just a few more things to clutter the corners up... look at indoor for things (i dunno why, but i think the pots would be a great clutter-er for this dungeon). Also, i suggest you consider using the two floor masks that look like a pile of really dark dirt--not the green-ish dirt you used already, but the black stuff. There are two of them. Use the large one about as much as you have used the green dirt already, and use the small one a bit more (it doesn't take up as much space on each tile, so it blends in much better). Try to avoid putting them in the middle of the scene; put them more to the edges so that they aren't noticed so much.

Also, good job with the ruin debris . As with the floor masks, you might consider putting more in the corners (i'd do it only if i had more than one version of them. I can't recall if we do...).

Cheers,
Unislash

ok thnx for the feedback uni ill work on that tonight as my basketball tourneys are done and i have more free time